Rock climbing
And there I was up so high I could felt gravity trying to pull me back to the hard brown ground. From the ground the rock climbing wall looked as high as Mount Everest.
I had the most beautiful view in the whole world. I could hear clapping and cheering. It was scary and awesome at the same time. I felt my hands about to slip off the bright blue rock on the rock climbing wall
Then I saw Fraser coming up too. He had his tongue out looking tired. Fraser was not as fast as me, I was like a cheetah running for my pray the top of the rock climbing wall.
P.O.
2 comments:
Wow, Paige, you are very clever to write on a "blog". I like the use of similes and adjectives in your story. You have worked hard on this, well done.
~Toni~
Wow Paige, you are very clever to write on a "blog". I like the way you used adjectives and similes in your story. You have worked hard. Well done!
~Toni~
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